Monday, December 21, 2009

AN UNFORGETTABLE JOURNEY

As tiny tots we set foot here,
One morning when the sun shone bright.
Little did we know or think at least,
That our lives here would be like the sunlit east !

The teachers scolded when we talked,
Indifferent about the lessons ongoing....
We felt bad then but now we feel
Had they not then where would we have been?

History for us was the biggest mystery
And geography fetched us circles red;
Chemical equations haunted us
While the EVE teacher rarely saw our face.

Physics was an ocean in the dark
When exams brought with them bagfuls of misery.
We thought we'd face them like a valiant knight,
But the syllabus forced us to use chits in our fight.

What exams couldn't, results did for us
And we thought we'd study the next day...
That 'next day' our lives havn't yet seen
As fun and frolic soon overtook the guilt!

The shrinking grades or the redder marks did nothing towards our aim
As the next day we bunked Maths again to play a volleyball game.
Suspension followed along with glaring parents
But all this couldn't prevent us from bunking again !

Amidst all this ruckus we learnt a few lessons of life...
We formed bonds of unbreakable camaraderie
And knew love among friends that would always suffice.

We had our own share of brawling
Which sometimes took a turn dangerous.
But these fights lead to stronger bonds
And taught how to compromise for peace.

Follies committed all kept aside,
We did do the school proud alright.
Competitions we have won and emerged victorious,
Things we'll be remembered for in the upcoming years.

But this saga now seems a mile too short
When we emerge from this institution great...
We bow before our teachers and give parting hugs to our friends.
We'll always be in each-others heart although we are miles away!

20 comments:

Unknown said...

mast

shuvankar said...

thats so nice and woowwwwwwwwww"""

Unknown said...

''Itz just awesome yaar''.......
u took me bak 2 mah childhood days via these JOURNEY.....thanx a lot.....

Rahul said...

nice......bacchi......

Unknown said...

This is something wonderful.ur sense of humour & creativity is
gr8..u can write really well.keep it up. :)

Unknown said...

amazing...reading this i dread those days wen il be leaving skul....just thinking about it brings tears to my eyes....

Anonymous said...

in one word - 'a gr8 poem' ....
see even i cannot follow the word limit in praising u :)

Swarnendu said...

Awesome !!Too good.This is what I expect of ur brain.Hope to see this poem published someday(U know it will be :D).Anyways Keep up ur creation.HATS OFF TO YOU...And do be in contact!!3 cheers for us!!(HIP HIP HURRAY)X 3...

Cherry said...

too good for words...i'll miss u di...

DEBASHREE said...

Thanks everybody....
But i must warn you this poem is not a good one in public interest (according to Malati Teacher who feels its communicates a wrong message to people but still she got this printed in our Year Book)...But isn't this what school life is all about...strong lessons learnt in an environment of fun and frolic...whatsay??

coolavi007 said...

jst awsmm..d real facts of our life..may b we miss...but d genious not..here dis is an example...
kp it up buddy..all d bst

Madhurima Mahato said...

lovelyyyyyyyyyy

Unknown said...

1 of d best compilation i hv ever read...of our entire skul lyf in dese 10 paragraphs....very nicee...way 2 go gal...

Unknown said...

an unforgettable poem........ by an unforgettable poet in the making

Lata jha said...

hey awesome poem...... i dint know dat u'v got this skill too!!!!!!!!! gr888 workk... while reading d poem i got reminded of my skul dazzz... lovely poem...

somu said...

fataye diso........

Blue Cloud said...

But this saga now seems a mile too short
When we emerge from this institution great...
We bow before our teachers and give parting hugs to our friends.
We'll always be in each-others heart although we are miles away!
I like these poem best...it made me feel coming back my school life before as a baby girl like you...
Very wonderful....very nice poems from ur heart...thanks

Blue Cloud said...

Words from your heart are so nice!
They remind me about my school age..
Very wonderful...very nice...poems
Thank you so much..my dear

Archana Anand said...

this is an awesum poem yaar!!
it reminded me of those 14 years,250 days,and 6 hours spent in mah skool.
hats-off!!

Unknown said...

It reminded me of d schul days !!! relived d memories again - thnx d wonderful construction of your poem!! :)