The wide world all around me,
Beautiful to all but a pain for me.
I look around and i gauge the miles,
Too full of people,but where among them is me?
I see a light ray midst the darkness,
And i rush towards it with excited madness.
I search,I seek and I crave for a friend,
But deserting people seems to be the day's trend!
He who came once with glittering stars,
Left soon after leaving me shattered like a dead flower.
I gave him my light but he offered shadows,
Only to leave me amidst drought stricken meadows.
I cried and cried expecting him to be back,
But all he did was treat me like a discarded sack.
I gave him my heart,it is true,
But what he did was change me all through.
He is no more with me but here i stand,
Changed forever with his memories like footprints on sand.
He who went, took away my dreams.......
Dreams which i had nourished with the utmost care it seems.
That's not all,dear friends, please hold on.
You know?Challenges and sorrows gripped my life as he moved on.
But I know that I have to live,
I know I must servive,
Because deed can change destiny,
No man can ever decide it.
Just like a billion drops makes the ocean full,
Bits of effort provide our dreams fuel.
To face the tide is what the mighty do,
Losers leave it upon Almighty to make their wish-cans full.
10 comments:
wow!!!!! u are talented........ dont stop ur good work
nice one......good......keep it up........n da best part is that it express da felling of us teenagers in a very beautifulmanner
Tat was cool ..... U r a cool person n always tryin somethin nu ...... so carry on . ROCK ON
wow!it's amazing.....u are very talented....it depicts ur amazing philosophy abt life & good creativity.keep up the good work
awsm..it shows ur imagination..nd creativeness...want more...so dnt stop...just write more..for us..
all d best..
mast hai............keep it up yaar
its cooooooooooooool
HEY DEBO, ITS AMAZING YAAR.....IT SEEMS AS IF IT HAS BEEN WRITTEN BY SOME WRITER...REALLY U R ROCKING.....KEEP IT GOING AND BEST OF LUCK TO U
hey debashree i think you should write more...you have this wonderful gift with you...so use it to the fullest...seriously i have really become a fan of yours...
Arey keep writing these adn finally publish these as poetry collection of yours n I'm sure that u'll get recognized in the world......
Really
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